This poem was written at 8am this morning because i felt that me criticising other people's poetry was not fair as they didnt know where i stood as a poet and where i was standing to say anything about the work of someone. This will remove any misconceptions
Welcome to my world now lets begin
All thats around here are my sins
No birds chirp and no clouds go by
This is me, until i die
Many times i have tried to change
But i fail to see what's so strange?
My hands covered in blood you see
My heart broken, as it will always be
I think of purity yet it never shows
My mind wanders yet it knows
The hurt I feel to tell a lie
This is me, until i die
Now as i stare fate in my face
I realise how i could've changed
All the pain i suffered, has set me free
My heart broken,as it will always be
I take my last breath and realise
This is me,until i die
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You my friend are an inspiration to me and im sure many others
makes one think
depressing. im copypasting that.
I know, it takes intelligence to actually come up with something decent. People who lack it use the copy/paste function. Not to mention these are my feelings and my own. Portrayed in a tapestry of words that create effects. But thankyou for sharing my work with others, Please dont claim it as your own and give credit where its due.
-Adeem